Idene's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Gatling Girl]

very nice!

The pose is reminiscent of Ezio's in AC2, the detail and look of the suit is quite awesome, and the chains of ammo came out very good, and her face is nicely done.

Only thing about this tho is that her legs are quite skinny and small. This is a very hard trouble i've had in my drawings, but just practice, and force yourself to draw her legs bigger, and they'll start to look more natural. :3

8/10, 4/5

Kaptain-Karmel responds:

I was going for a more leaning forward kind of thing. But yeah, I guess they are a bit small. :\

[Practise Makes Perfect]

pretty good!

your drawing skill is good, coloring is quite fantastic, but the only thing that's irking me on this is her lack of eyebrows. >_< that's about the only thing i can find off with this. other than that, very good and sexy. ;3

8/10, 4/5, fav'd

amyrenee responds:

Lol I was wondering if anyone was going to notice that she didn't have any eye brows Lol. :D Thank you though.

[Dad, meet Mom.]

freakin sweet

very awesome! The thought of Mom never occurred to me, and you did it quite well. And the disproportionateness... well let me put it this way; Dad is a giant hulking mass of muscle, Kid's got a head that's about a third of his total height, so it would make sense for Mom's body to be a little bit off from real human proportion. THAT'S THE FREAKIN POINT! *not yelling at you, but others who are nit picky picking that out.*

ANYWAY, I completely agree with what A-Shift says, and maybe, just throwing an idea out, give her an apron, maybe with the skull on the center, or designed on a pocket of the apron, you know? or maybe have some hair coming out of her suit?

Shading's good, design is excellent, background is lacking, but suffices.

9/10, 5/5, fav'd, and i didn't know you had an NG account. XD

Sabtastic responds:

AaAAGH. GOD DAMN. You guys are persuasive! lol
Workin on a version 2 asap! XD

..At first I just thought I'd tribute it and move on, but I guess It'd be a dick move to just leave these great ideas of everyone's un-drawn! Thanks for your input! Glad you found me on here, too! lol